Things He’ll Never Know.

• Artist: lovergirl116
• Description: This is a poem about my boyfriend, i love him dearly, but don't know if he feels the same, i know we're young but thats the point the inexperence makes it hurt more. so please read, rate comment :) the writting helps me vent so look out for more !!
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: things hell never know

Things He’ll Never Know
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He’ll never know how I feel
The one I chose to his heart steal
The only one to make me feel,
Anything more than what wasn’t real.

His fierce kiss,
His tender embrace
The only one to make my heart race.

But now this has changed,
He’s no longer the same
He’s drained all my love.
What there was left to drain.

He’ll sit at home and think of me
Telling himself he wants to be free
Not knowing we are meant to be.

My heart brakes,
To watch him chase,
Another girl with a pretty face.

I sit and stare,
Wondering why I should care?
It’s only my heart he wishes to tear.

I’ll leave one day
To let him have his play.
One day I’ll tell him I’ll no longer stay,
Maybe one day when I know what to say??
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Comments

[the Renaissance Lives]

Emotions are tricky, but I wish you the best. (Also, there were a couple grammatical errors. Not that it really matters, just in case you wanted to edit 'em)

[the Renaissance Lives]

The poem is slightly confusing... you love him, and yet he seeks another? Well, if he's your boyfriend and this is a true aspect, then I recommend trying to see things from another point of view and realize how it's somewhat degrading of yourself to stay in a relationship with him. There's a lot of truth in your statement about the young feeble heart, but how our early experiences will (hopefully) aid us for the future.

[lovergirl116]

sorry people i know i didnt pick 'know' up when i re- read but yes it was supposed to be now, please if anyone finds anything miss spelt or anything please tell me, thank you for reading.. the comment and the poem smile