I want to tell you...

• Artist: The Unfinished Story
• Description: My friend fearless black rose and I co-wrote this piece,inspired by our respective...situations.
• Date: 10/23/2008
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Let your love engulf me
Let your breath surround me
Let your sight consume me,
Such that forever feels too short...

Just the thought that we're under the same sky,
Makes me feel like we're so close...
And though far be the distance,
I see you when I see the moon,in its crescent sheen...

I want,more than ever,to look into your eyes again-
It puts me into an oblivion so bliss...
And after all this time apart,
All those moments,we can re-live,with one simple kiss.......

Comments

[Nyxs_Ace]

great poem overall.... but the way i usually read poetry, it doesnt really flow very well.
5/5

[fearless black rose]

Cool,you got it posted!!!

[[Midnight].[Memories]]

I wish I could write like that.