My Fatal Mistake

• Artist: the color greyx
• Description: Read and comment.
• Date: 10/24/2008
• Tags: fatal mistake

I can see straight through those eyes
and everything alright.
What you know and what you do
was always going to be different.


You say that you were never wrong,
and on, and on.
So I guess you made your point from the start
and now i can't bare to see your face
now your my fatal mistake
and now i'm gone
and now i'm gone


I can see straight through your mind
and through your heart alright.
what you said and what you did
was always going to be the same

Comments

[IndiePunkRokker]

It's a good poem. I think more could be done, but you definitely have talent. Keep writing, I will watch for more.