Good and Bad

• Artist: Malum Canis
• Description: A little bit on the duality of life.
  Enjoy :p, feel free to critique, don't hold back.
• Date: 10/25/2008
• Tags: good

Life can be good,
Life can be bad.
It can be happy,
It can be sad.
It is full of wonderfull desire,
and the woman you love, constantly calling you a liar.
Two halves of the same coin, dark and light.
Constantly waging an endless fight,
Over minds, and souls, a swirling maelstrom of wrong an right.

For some loves journey, it all ends with a girl in a veil.
So beautiful, and yet it's all frail.

For others though, ends it not, with a girl, through the church, she makes no trail.
For some their feeling come out in a lurch, and they are denied.
Weak and broken, they lay there, a dept paid.
Their Minds slowly fade, the reaper knocks on their door, and they fall to the floor.

Comments

[ceresB]

That's one of the reality of life. Don't really like unhappy ending. But it's probably your style of writing, dark. It's good. Thank you.

[Sutaa Yagami]

The first four lines are too simple, but it's good otherwise. I like the mord maelstrom-it describes life well sometimes...