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A point to the sky
Was all it took
For me
And a handful of others
To take a look
At that moment
Standing in the busy square
She grabbed our attention
This nameless figure
As she jumped
From the tallest
Grayest building
Now it might have been a trick of the sun
But it sure fooled me
With her arms out
And the sun over head
It looked for moment
Like she had wings
And as this angel came towards us
Falling ever faster
Questions filled my head
Questions
For which I'll never get an answer
Questions
I wanted to ask her
What was it like?
For a moment flying?
And when you started to drop
What were you thinking?
She looked so graceful
So free
Liberated and given wings
Free to choose her future
Her death
It seemed like eternity
As she fell
Then time caught up with her
With us speechless bystanders
In the blink of an eye
She was crumpled at our feet
Eyes peacefully closed
Mouth set in a pristine smile
If her body was at a different angle
It would have seemed like she was sleeping
I almost envied her
In her state of bliss
But then
As a crimson veil flowed out around her
Someone screamed
I didn't know her
Didn't know why
Why she gave up
Or gave in
Why she lost
Or did she win?
I stood shocked
Starring at her broken body
Starred at this nameless
Fallen angel
The wings were gone
And I cried
For a stranger
Who had lost her wings
And because no one else cried
For this defeated girl
Who had no name
- by tksunshine93 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: She Flew
- Artist: tksunshine93
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Description:
so i had this weird dream and this was it so yeah
comment please!!! - Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: flew suicide
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Comments (6 Comments)
- c l e r ii x3 - 03/23/2009
- this is really really good. i love it! it really expressed feelings so good.
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- Faerix Fox - 12/04/2008
- Wow, that's a great way of telling the story. You did really well. I find that a lot of my ideas come from dreams. 5 stars!
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- puppyplace - 12/03/2008
- i saw this on my gaia info and i just had to read it i luved this poem its awesome this is perfect idc how u couldve possibly came up with it but i luv it espesally the last sentence how.....perfect
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- DemeaningMeaning - 12/01/2008
- you commented on my work, and you told me to check out your stuff...this one stood out to me...i totally believe that you have talent girl, this peice was amazing! i write without rhyming most of the time, and i see you went with a very fast approach. i've been working at this style, but nothing has really come to me. while i've been working on it, you've proably mastered it!! Good job!!
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- PaintTheSkyRed - 10/26/2008
- I like this. Good job.
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- minimel1 - 10/26/2008
- wow I like the words you used and the short lines
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