- Its alright. Come closer. Let me see your face. Be calm child. Ill wash away the blood. Cover up the bruises. I'm sorry i lost my temper. I swear that was the last time. Don't tell a sole. Don't flee my arm. Don't shrink at my words. That was the last time i promise.... Till the next bottle I drink....
- by xTheWiltedRosex |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: Till the next bottle
- Artist: xTheWiltedRosex
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- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: pain
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- xJeriROCKSx - 12/13/2008
- wow this is beautiful!!! XD
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- hahime-chan - 10/26/2008
- Wow, this is pretty good. But personally, I think it would look better in verse form. Putting line breaks and the proper punctuation marks can heighten the drama a lot more.
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- Parasite Party - 10/26/2008
- Woah. This is good.
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