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I can’t imagine,
I couldn’t pretend
That we’d ever be friends again.
It’s more awkward,
The wounds still fresh,
My heart is put to the test.
My mind screams,
My spirit dies,
I can’t keep living...
Loveless lies.
Please take this love,
And put it out,
Before I’m filled
With so much doubt
That I can’t function,
That I can’t lie.
I guess I’m not the girl,
You’ll love until you die.
I wish and wish,
And wish some more,
That I could say,
"I hate you more!"
But how could I say,
I hate you at all,
When you’ve caught me more times
Than I could fall.
And dealing with clumsy me,
You’d almost think there’d be a fee.
Well I was right,
And I’ve paid you twice,
I just hope that
Broken hearts and
Shattered souls...
Will suffice.
- by Syra_Anna_Belle |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: What Comes After...
- Artist: Syra_Anna_Belle
- Description: A poem I wrote after my boyfriend broke up with me, then began to out right ignore me, after promising that we'd still me friends (his words not mine)... so I wrote this.. all my friends really like the emotion in it, and I hope you will to....
- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: what comes after heart break
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Comments (6 Comments)
- kylie3497 - 12/30/2008
- u should change "will sufice" in to "will not sacrifice"
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- SUNTEKE - 12/22/2008
- I love the heart put into this poem
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- Syra_Anna_Belle - 10/27/2008
- Thanks all of you! Your comments and votes mean a lot to me!
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- Jekista - 10/27/2008
- I have had to deal with the exact thing before and i know what it feels like ...love it ...not the feelings ..the poem
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- Harlequin_Ana - 10/27/2008
- this is so awesome,i cant relate to it cus my ex boyfriend was never there for me,but i have a lot of mixed emotions for this poem,its really beautiful.really good job ^.^
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- hahime-chan - 10/26/2008
- Nice. I felt your pain through the poem. I may never have had a boyfriend, but I think I now have some idea as to how painful a breakup can be. Good job, sweetie ^-^
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