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A star in the day,
Please, oh please, keep the doctor away.
The moon across the dark black sky,
I don't bother anymore to even ask why.
The rain is starting to fall and I stand and feel it pour. It hits my head, my heart, my soul. The clouds cover the sun that shines over the world and the cold dresses the wind. I shiver. I blink my eyes to rid myself of the water and I turn home. How far? How long? I may never know.
- by sayaandtenshi |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/27/2008 |
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- Title: The waves that control my soul
- Artist: sayaandtenshi
- Description: Here we go again. My depression is filling. I know the bottom half isn't poetry but the top is and the bottom is how I feel at the moment.
- Date: 10/27/2008
- Tags: waves control soul
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Shad0w Cloud - 10/28/2008
- Very good. It's all very poetic, and the bottom, depending on how interpreted is poetry as well... 5/5
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- tksunshine93 - 10/28/2008
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yes the top half is poetry but in my perspective the bottom half is as well
very good but do remember that true poetry is what you alone think it is
it doesn't matter if it's unconventional or out of the ordinary
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