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From the time of her birth,
to the time of her death,
the only thing she wanted
was your warm embrace.
Its you that she lives for,
and for you, she'll die.
- Title: live for love
- Artist: Aisupop
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Description:
a bit short~ sorry ^^
a lyric/poem i made yesterday afternoon :) - Date: 10/29/2008
- Tags: short poem love
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- areyououthere - 06/08/2009
- you failed to paint a picture or emphasize a metaphor. you failed at poetry. please, at least learn the BASICS before trying to write poetry again. thank you have a nice day.
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- Helenarth - 05/29/2009
- I love it! I don't think it needs to be longer; I think the shortness adds to the charm. ^^
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