I love you

• Artist: x I - S e i r y u - I x
• Description: how a guy's feelings can develop for a girl. ^-^
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: love romance true

I have seen some precious art,
the like which tears the soul apart,
you have the biggest place in my heart,
you hit me with the true love dart.

My feelings for you will never grow old,
through secrets i have told,
it was you which made me bold,
you're more special than the rarest gold.

Don't cry your self to sleep,
I'll be here for you to keep,
like a warm fluffy sheep,
I'll keep you warm and safe with feelings so deep.

I love you so much,
falling ever so more in love with every touch,
never breaking your loving clutch,
the greatest love for you from me is such.

Please let me keep you here,
forever closer and near,
making you feel so dear,
never making you shed a tear.

Comments

[Helenarth]

Cute poem, the only improvement would be not to rhyme so much, I think. Like allisun1 said, it sounds sort of forced. But it's nice!

[Tri_Force95]

good poem, mainly because of how ture it is, and because all of that is happening to me.

[allisun1]

Nice job, but it almost sounds like you tried to rhyme too hard, but hey, all of my poems turn out that way! lol! keep writing the message is really cute!