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What is the Ocean
The ocean is like sadness,
the cold water is like the pain.
The blue reflection is the tears,
and the ripples are the stains.
The ocean is like fear,
it sinks down to the dark.
The waves washing onto the shore,
is your beating heart.
The ocean is like death,
it has many secret questions.
The seaweed is like life,
that has important lessons.
The ocean is like love,
it endlessly goes on.
Love can hurt you,
just like the horizon sun.
The ocean is your feelings,
it changes in every way.
Your feelings control you,
every single day.
- Title: My Tears Make Up the Ocean
- Artist: xxkychan
- Description: 2 years have passed since i made this, but the message is still as strong: life is full of emotions and they shape you into who you are.
- Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: tears make ocean
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Comments (5 Comments)
- fairy princess girl 88 - 02/20/2009
- that is such a beautiful poem
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- iismelllikeshiz - 01/05/2009
- wow lovely poem i luv it 5/5 hehe i allways luved life relating to the ocean ^^
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- musicbyme - 11/02/2008
- wow this poem is soo lovely
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- YOU DIE N0W - 11/02/2008
- wow, thats a really deep poem. 5/5
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- Chezekake teh sika - 11/02/2008
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words cannot describe the beauty that you have captured
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