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A light I threw to my eternity,
A glow, burnt vast and again bright,
Every part of ones mind, ones body, ones soul,
Poured from the chambers of my deepest dungeons,
And leaked across the glistening tear stained floor,
For you to walk, to slip on by -
Unnoticed, Untouched -
Leaving me with but nothing,
Nothing but, to question why
Like a plague, you swept through here with lies and deceit,
I was left there kneeled, shameful to have then bowed at your feet,
The words leave the fall and seem worthless once more,
I gave it to you, everything I had within me to offer,
Blindly you ripped through me, everything tenaciously tore
I had two weapons, in left hand, in right,
Who would believe I'd defend against light,
I held to them with perseverance, with strength,
I drew once more a silent breath, taken with me to length
For now to me clear, as if visor now lifted,
Given green eyes to see, through your deceit I've now sifted,
And I ask you to be there, your presence still felt,
The card of fate I'd received, sadistically dealt
Potentially something new, and no longer you,
Looking eternity in eye's, my spirit never dies...
My two brothers at side, with arms open wide,
Welcoming, loved, trusted and pleasant,
No longer the idle uncertain peasant,
We've all left it behind, and together go on,
Once again I shall tell you,
Your last light has now shone
Like faded claustrophobia, and to think it all gone
I rest easy, relaxed, calm...
My emotion in own hands,
My peace taken back from your quick hastened palm,
Light's out, sweet darkness, your light it's last shone,
I have a new beginning,
I've decided to move on,
I will be fine, it shall be great,
And paid a visit again, my definite friend,
I named him Fate.
- by Sensational Saint |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/03/2008 |
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- Title: My Friend Fate
- Artist: Sensational Saint
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Description:
I've been writing poetry for quite some time, have received much praise and told I'm of poetic maturity, and have a poetic license more powerful than most youth of my same age, what do you think? Do you agree? And what of my poetry do you enjoy?
I in fact wrote this poem recently, within the last 5 months or so... I loved writing this one, and it came from the very depths of my mind and heart. =] Enjoy... and please leave a comment/rating. - Date: 11/03/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- AshenAberration - 11/08/2008
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I quadruple anything anyone says...
IT IS GODLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Report As Spam
- Sensational Saint - 11/04/2008
- Sho? That good? Woah... Thanks! =]
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- RedWhiteBlack - 11/03/2008
- Stop posting poetry on on Gaia, and start submitting it to publications. This is too good for the Gaia arenas.
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- Sensational Saint - 11/03/2008
- Thank you for your comments =] Yup, NakedJack... This is true, I am only human...
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- NakedJack - 11/03/2008
- You are an inspiration. I compare myself to you and see that I am pitiful. I don't know what to say about it, where to start? "My emotion in own hands" maybe, Emotions in my own hands? That in noway says anything about your ability but only marks you as human.
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- yuyu-chin182 - 11/03/2008
- it is real beautiful.
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