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I cry, I cry, day and night
Thinking of you, imagining you
But hurting cause im lost without you
If the time comes, we will soon be together
Instead of dieng Emotionally and Lost forever
We would be together forever
I would love you each and everyday
Its just the distance tearing us away
We talk all day and some what night
Hopefully it wouldn't lead to a fight
If we fought it would lead to tears,
Tears lead to cutting to take the pain away
In the end nothing was lost nor gained
Except the fact were in alot more pain
Our fight is over, but our tears still fall
I feel my heart as if it was a shadow on the wall
Our love has ended and so have I,
I won't rest in peace until i say goodbye
I say goodbye and there is something I wish
And all i wish was our love wasn't a lie...
- by XxXJareBearXxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/03/2008 |
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- Title: The Worst Lie
- Artist: XxXJareBearXxX
- Description: this is the very first poem I wrote followed by more after this...this poem has been published and put in 2 books now...and i would like to share it with others if they would like to read it...let me know what you think and comment it and rate it plz and thank you (:
- Date: 11/03/2008
- Tags: worst
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Comments (7 Comments)
- run_away_babe - 11/10/2008
- lovee it!
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- happysadgtttg - 11/05/2008
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this is a really great poem
Congratulations for getting it published! - Report As Spam
- QueenxofxSekyd - 11/05/2008
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Good for you, Jare! You didn't tell me you got anything published!
Anyway, you did really well at inserting emotion into the poem. Some prose is just words, you know? Words that don't evoke any feeling. You picked very well-thought out phrases for the poem. I really enjoyed reading it smile - Report As Spam
- DiexToxSurvive - 11/04/2008
- holy cow! its really good! ur an amazing poet biggrin
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- RAWR Charity Mule - 11/04/2008
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It was really good. =]
Congrats on getting it published. - Report As Spam
- rich milk chocolate - 11/03/2008
- thats hella deep on the real. im really feelin that. ur really good at writing poems
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- tksunshine93 - 11/03/2008
- It is very good and oh so bittersweet, which are always my favorites. :3 It's very moving and I like it very much. Bravo!!
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