..and with all that i give..

• Artist: Danamii
• Description: there was a moment in my life...several actually where i felt like i wasnt trying hard enough, i was upset about it, but i also didnt care what others thought...what was it called? oh yeah teen angst. ^^
• Date: 11/07/2008
• Tags: with give

Is it me?
Or this need?
To smoke angel
or weed
and disperse
this cruel curse
evil innocently
get a knife and see
how hard i can bleed
with my blood in the air
people see i dont care
and warfare
atom bombs facing east
it meets west
children feel the need
for the screams in their chest
will my dad even live?
and with all that i give
will the fighting just stop?
and with all that i give
the fighting does not
no excuse
make it hot
and with all that i give
to just make it to the top...
down below
where grass grows
it discovers you know
you cant reap what you sew...

...ah im just going in a rant know...

by daminami

Comments

[P a n c a k l e s]

I really like your vocabulary and how you fit rhymes in there. They were clever which gives you bonus.
5/5