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• Artist: (Forever)Yours
• Description: Something I thought up in the middle of study hall....bored out of my mind.
  It's not much but I decided to start off with this and see how people like it before submitting my other works.
• Date: 11/20/2008
• Tags: untitled

You and I are not much alike
I think it's in our eyes
For when you see me you see
Beauty
And all I see are lies

You and I are not much alike
I think it's in in our voices
For when you speak to me it's
Magical
And all I make are noises

You and I are not much alike
I think it's in our souls
For you love me with
All of yours
And mine, because of you, is whole

Comments

[Acelin Rae]

Bravo! I really like it. I see an issue occuring with the characters. Write a prequel? 5/5