Painful Memories

• Artist: tksunshine93
• Description: Just something that popped into my head after a fight with someone I really love.
  
  I know the first part rhymes to the extreme but it's suppose to so that the ending realization has more of an impression, or at least it should.
  
  So if your going to comment and rip me about the rhyming don't bother....otherwise do please comment!!!
• Date: 11/22/2008
• Tags: painful memories

Remember all those rendezvous
And you never followed through
But I always waited for you
Remember all those nights you cried
Always telling me I lied
Whenever you did a part of me died
Remember how you fell apart
Seeing you like that broke my heart
But I loved you from the start
Remember when we knew how to smile
I haven't for quite a while
We stretched our lies for miles and miles
Remember when I acted strong
No one ever knew anything was wrong
But I'll be gone before too long

Because I'm through with remembering
All the hurt gone by
I'm tired of holding it in
Now it's my turn to cry

Comments

[Idark Core]

that's what i'm feeling right now

[HarajukuGirl92]

Love it!5/5

[PINK RATS TAIL]

what inspired this one*

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

lol its very nice and i did notice the inpact of the ending and no i wasnt gonna "rip" you about the rhyming bcuz sum things should not b corrected if they come from the heart, only to b understood and compatible. i like how it tells a story and sorta turns it towards you toward the end. very nice. your pertty good with freeverse, evn tho it not really freeverse in the beginning, so idk which catagory it really belongs in but still very nice