that follish haert..

• Artist: Dayzheart
• Description: i know it is not that great but i wanna know how to improve it
  waiting for your comments
  (i wrote these when i was sad and angry so it is real feelings )
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: follish haert

am such a fool girl to full in love with you
to love someone forgat what love ment
am such a fool girl to let my haert deside and follow you where ever you are
to let my haert make a fool out me
i wish i didnt close my eyes my ears my maind
and just open my haert to an adventure but you know what there is no adventure in a broken haert
that follish me
that follish haert

what a pitty i thought there was somthing magical betwen us
because only magic can change the world
change people

what a shame i thuoght you care more about me
more to not let go
enogh love and trust to faight the world together
but i know i know
there is good in you so pleas dont faight it like every thing alse
my heart saw something more than a black jaket and stern that gose so will with that segrat
i saw ascard boy closing every door to his heart
a
smalle child desided never to cry
so he wore a max you have till now
so why the act you are allowed a moment of weak arent you like me another humen been

Comments

[- Kuro Feather -]

your writting skills are really improving =) ..
لا تحرمينا يديدج سارونة ^__^
و تسلم الأنامل الذهبية على هالمشاعر الحلوة

[rubberbend]

real feellings..yeah
i like it and sounds like you have some trouble with your English(in your profile you said you are from Kuwait(?)
i'll try to rewrite it smile