Tears of blood

• Artist: the silver belladonna
• Description: A poem that sums up alot
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: tears blood pain mask hiding

tears of blood slowly slide down my face
no one but me sees that very sad trace
warm and bright red
streaking my face with only dread
how i wish i was dead
joy is something i rarely feel
layers no one can peal
sadness is so easy such a simple thing
oh how the demons sing
wishing i would join their little ring
tears of blood slowly slide down my face
no one but me sees that very sad trace
smiling and laughter my mask
it is not a simple task.

Comments

[Sang De Loups]

hm, really nice, i like the words you used

[xXHARMONIC blADE Xx]

wow. this is so deep. i really like it .

[VoltOfThunder]

not bad. neutral but free verse has never been a favorite of mine. Ratings:
Concept: 3/3
Style: 1/2
Total: 4/5
^_^ good work, it's good against my tastes

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

i luv it!! that is so true sumtime i just wanna die!!