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• Artist: Starstruck_Skies
• Description: Hope you guys like it~
  I'm not exactly good at writing poems...so...heck comment away.
  Just don't make some sorry excuse to vote low.
  That's not cool. ;3
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: heartless

Hello
I hold you close
Caress your head
You're safe now
No more hurt
No more tears
No more pain
I'm here to liberate you
But
I show you for who you truly are
Show you all the things you have done
Your thoughts and dreams I know by heart
I love you
Why don't you let me be near you?
I can help you
But why won't you let me?
I can comfort you
I can take away that pain that makes you cry yourself to sleep every night
Why won't you let me help you?

Comments

[Starstruck_Skies]

Thank you everyone. ^ - ^

[Precious Misery]

i ltke the first part too,but over all its wonderful!

[pretty_face4life]

I like the first part, until it gets to But... but that is because the first part is touching. Good job. 3.5-4 / 5 stars