SHUNNED

• Artist: oxo_fox_oxo
• Description:
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: shunned

a pain so sharp
nothing can compair
lonelyness and hatred
both confuse my mind

the need for compassion
both drive my mind
to the brink of insainty

all those glares
all those screams
ring in my head
till i scream

shunned from the streets
shunned from my house

am i demon?
am i monster?

no one will answer
quiet silence,ignoring people
all stare at me

will someone tell me why im shunned
please ,oh please answer me

Comments

[NakedJack]

Softly spoken simple metaphor. No depth, no emotional power, reusing the same words. Its just isn't that well written at all. Still its not a love poem, that gets you some credit. 3/5

[atsyrk]

so so sad. is it true? depressing. All my entries are true.... true 4 me @ least

[Osirissassin]

that brought tears to my eyes

[Mega thatswhatshesaid]

sad im sry...