Death Unto Me

• Artist: VoltOfThunder
• Description: A poem/song I wrote my Sophomore year, I never found time to write out any instrumental parts, so I guess it's just a poem. This was what got me started on my major poetry focus and I have to thank my friends for all their encouragement along my works. I was in a really if-y mood when I wrote this. As is probably obvious. I hope you like.
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: death unto problems hatred outcast

Death unto me,
It's beautiful I can see,
Blood running down my hand,
Dripping onto virgin land!

Death unto me,
Why can't you see?
There's a hole in my head,
And I'm laying in my bed!

(Life is meaningless!)
Death bring the only freedom,
That you'll ever have in this mess!
(Cure me of this curse of hatred!)
No one else can see,
The problems that it means to be me!

Death unto me,
Cut my leg off at the knee,
There's blood everywhere,
And I'm burning off my hair!

Death unto me,
I'll make you all see,
I feel so left behind,
And I'm sure that I am losing my mind!

(Why?!)
Am I alone in this life?
(Who?!)
Will be there to grieve my loss when I am gone?
(Why?!)
Does no one care about me?
I've done nothing wrong,
Yet I'm treated like an outcast..

Death unto me,
No longer can I see,
The priest is hanging over me,
But no one else is there!

Death unto me,
Now no one will see,
No, now no one will see,
The problems that it means to be me..

Comments

[The Living Rose Of Death]

i like it vote for my writing piece! its called demonic deck the halls
PS 5/5

[Calvicus]

I'm not saying it's not good, however, with as many of these poems or songs that try to be dark and sadistic, less and less the effect is on people.

[cuete23]

if u ever do figure out any instrumental it should hav a slow feeling to it but yet frighting

[Aqua_Ursus]

it was great!!!

[the silver belladonna]

it's amazing it shows feeling but is still cold and heartless i don't think that makes sense but w/e it's great keep writing because ur absolutly amazing at it and yeah the structure is great i luv ur style too it's unique and ur description is great it says a lot with out saying too much

[xXUnholy WolfXx]

Wow i like it... its got great structure and form....
good lyrics!