My Heart's Lockdown

• Artist: Different_Gurl
• Description: I wrote this sonnet last year for an English assignment. Right after a break-up. I hope it speaks to you as it did for me.
  
  ~Melinda
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: hearts lockdown

This love is forever etched in my heart;
Though it has been crushed, broken, hurt, and torn;
My heart still holds to him as from the start;
All my strength has gone and from him I am worn.

I have seen him not but he’s in my dreams;
I try to forget, I try to move on;
But I can sense him there as my heart screams;
I still love him, and to his eyes I’m drawn.

My life seems to be half of what it was;
He was my motivation that once thrived;
I know completing me is what he does;
Without him, I’m empty, I feel deprived.

He is the one cause for my heart’s lockdown;
For he remains there, he is all around.

Comments

[titancheerleader4life]

I really liked it. I write too and this did speak to me. as you know thats what us writters want our readers to feel, the same as it felt for you. hurt, happiness, saddness, ect. I really liked reading this and I wish you Good Luck smile
titancheerleader4life

[Different_Gurl]

Thank you smile

[The mistake demon child]

awesome!

[The Asian Chick]

that is so nice it really spoke to me