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I'm surrounded by fears,
From strangers and peers.
Surrounded by Everyone,
and yet, I feel there is no one.
There are voices around me,
both invisible and seen,
influencing my conscience,
as well as my dreams.
They are wishing me away,
and taunting the thought,
of running away,
to the haven I have sought.
Saying the pros and cons,
of leaving my life behind,
knowing of the wrongs,
But still wanting to find...
...To find the one girl,
Who I've been searching for,
The girl who has forever changed my world,
The girl who I will love, forever and even more.
Surrounded by fates, by choices, by paths...
by friends, by enemies, I need to do the math.
I'm surrounded by the people, who are important in my life,
but the one absent person, is my hopefully future wife.
Should I run away?
Or perhaps, should I stay?
I don't know what to do.
But I do know, I want to be with you.
I love you, honey, I hope to see you soon.
- Title: Surrounded
- Artist: Killvin
- Description: Uhhhh... poem? lol
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: surrounded
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Foxy_Vampiress - 02/04/2009
- Beautiful. You have a gift my friend. Like i can see from your eyes almost. You write like i do kinda stream of consiousness. Living in that moment as it happens. Lookn up stream of consciousness writing style see what i mean.
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- I LAWLY I - 01/08/2009
- again good job killvin
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- Account Not In Progress - 01/06/2009
- C'mon--u've met her online...
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- Rook219 - 12/01/2008
- The heart can't be rationalized with all the time...
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- aria arisia - 12/01/2008
- wait it out my dear wait it out...i hav listened to my heart b4..n got a kjick to my a**..so b careful wat u decide..listen to ur brain more thn ur heart..
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- Jolly Dramaseeker1346 - 11/30/2008
- It does but then again it is ur life. (not to b rude) *HUGS* I hope u feel a little bit okay!
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- Killvin - 11/30/2008
- My heart wants me to run away... but common sense is telling me to stay... so I should follow my heart, but won't... not now at least... make sense?
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