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Sleeping under the willow tree
branches kissing her cheeks,
venturing through that small dream
venturing through the wonderland
Card of heart
girl of heart
queen of heart
faint of heart
A peek of that beautiful garden
adorned with crimson roses
blurred by her own tears
wept 'cause she couldn't go to that beautiful garden
Hushed by her tears
to find out how much she cried
too much pain which
a person, a girl, could not bear
Left alone again
went off and journeyed that small dream
hoping to go to that beautiful garden
'til in her way had been more and more doors to take
Finally at the garden
knife at her throat
a game where all scrambled had begun,
a game which that girl of heart could not understand
A game which would cost the players their lives
the game where all had a knife at throat
where which the knife managed to cut
where which the knife turned into an axe.
- by Artistic Visionary |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Through the Wonderland
- Artist: Artistic Visionary
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Description:
A one-shot poem that I just did. xP
I've been reading Alice in Wonderland and have been listening to Vocaloid songs, soo... o.o
I only, in the poem, stopped at where the Duchess was beheaded since I didn't get farther than that. - Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: through wonderland
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xXxLoveHugsDrugsxXx - 03/11/2009
- ......wow....That was amazing!! your really good!
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- Kisame85302 - 12/01/2008
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nice job mitsukai u have a very open mind ^^
P.S this is itachi biggrin - Report As Spam
- Joanna the n00b hunter - 11/30/2008
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Woah Harpie! That was really good! =D Good luck! =3
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- -xo--Ali--ox- - 11/30/2008
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I wouldnt have made the connection to alice in wonderland if you haddent mentioned it.
but your poem was organized, clever, and very moving. all in all a fantastic read! - Report As Spam
- Kanashimi-Fuyu - 11/30/2008
- That was very interesting. smile
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