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I sit along the shore
The dark sky glistening
The reflection of the moon shining on the surface of the peaceful lake
All is quiet except for the crickets singing their song
A cherry blossom ripples the reflection
As the cherry blossoms fall...I touch the cold stones.It's been a month since he died...
- by Lovely Music Lover |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: As the Cherry Blossoms fall...
- Artist: Lovely Music Lover
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Description:
A poem that came to mind from way back when...
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: cherry blossoms fall
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Nikki4815 - 12/02/2008
- I really love it!!! 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"
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- Lovely Music Lover - 12/01/2008
- thanks everyone,but I don't think i'm really all that good =(
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- -BlackKiss16 - 12/01/2008
- I love this entry! <333. lawlz, The ending gave it a good flare to it, though!
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- Lovely Music Lover - 12/01/2008
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lol thanks =)
i put a twist ending at the end
it just seemed to fit to me =) - Report As Spam
- The Huntress Artemis - 12/01/2008
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wow, amazing
i really love it and the ending surprised me biggrin
5/5 make sure to check out my poem, avatar and short story biggrin - Report As Spam
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