Heartsong

• Artist: arrainrhod
• Description: this was something i made up about 2 years ago. it was my first poem. i like it. it kinda... expressed about how i felt at the time, i had writers block at the time i wrote this. so here it goes:
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: heartsong singing hearts writing

Heartsong



One day my heart stopped singing


I think it stopped beating too


One day my heart stopped bringing


Marvelous things from me to you




The day my heart stopped singing,


I got down on one knee


The day my heart stopped bringing,


I think it broke in three




Then I went to the mighty king,


Who I knew so well


I bowed before that mighty king


And said I'm not feeling swell




Well, said the mighty king


I'll give you a hook


Then maybe your heart will sing


And stop wallowing in the brook




And, indeed my heart began to sing,


It started to beat again, too


And, it started to bring


Marvelous things from me to you.



the end, hoped you liked it

Comments

[angreydark_rose94]

It started out good I thought it was like about heart break or lossing intrest then the king thing threw me way off. But for a first poem it is preety good. I hope your style has gotten better no offense or anything.

[Golden Sarah-Belle]

i didnt like the rhyming at all. but it was passable. is it about your relationship with god or what? im left confused, and thats never good

[koreancutie2]

wat the hell were u thinking?????