three times

• Artist: pandoraskeeper
• Description: this is about my ex who hurt me a lot
• Date: 12/02/2008
• Tags: three times

I gave you my love
You hurt me once
I gave you my heart
You hurt me twice
I gave you my hope
You dashed my dreams
I gave you my life
You ripped it two
I gave you a chance
You turned your back
I gave you my feelings
You stepped on each one
I gave you my soul
You used it till broken
I gave you the pieces
You didn’t give them back
I gave you everything
You gave me nothing
I gave you a girlfriend
You gave me a jerk
I gave you a lover
You gave me crap
I gave you my time
You gave me the cold shoulder
I gave you my self
You hurt me three times
I gave you my everything
You through it in my face
I gave you a choice
You made the wrong one
I gave you my future
You turned away
You did give me something
I got heart ache
Now its my turn to give
One last time
I give you my good bye
Till forever and the end of time

Comments

[RisexWithxthexDead]

Oh wow I like it. :] 5/5

[Obstruction]

really good, though there are some typos

[The Darke Assassin]

Wow, I have been through that one many times before. As my mom always told me, you have to kiss a lot of frogs before you find your prince. I'm still kissing....lol

[Rook219]

It's amazing ^_^
Though some of the typos disrupted the flow every once in a while...
In the end it gets the message of your heart through. The most important part ^_^ 5/5

[Lunarasea]

It's a bit repetitive. The first bit is wonderful, and overall, its a great poem that really shows how you feel. A definite 5/5. ^-^ I'm sorry. I hope you have better luck next time.

[Nikki4815]

Aww. So favoriting that one. 5/5. very sorry, if this is how you really feel about someone. I hope it works out, and you'll end up happy, no matter whoh you end up with. 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"