- There's a slight wonder of why you so enjoy to cause my heart blight.Your mystery makes me wonder if you shall set my heart into plunder of the deep blue ocean ,as the motion of the waves tosses and turns my confussed feelings my life is sent into mind reelings.I want to hold you,I want to touch you,but do you feel the same is my only question.But theres light from a parting of these waters,when you tell me of what you saught after...it only seems that you come to me with a broken heart for me to fix and let you fly free.You let my feelings float in this ocean.
- by Strictly Platonic |
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- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: the light
- Artist: Strictly Platonic
- Description: its all poetry just read and let it take you places..
- Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: light
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Comments (4 Comments)
- BeBe-Lee-Lee98 - 12/03/2008
- I AM A FAN! U ARE AWESOEM! I AM VOTING FOR U. I HOPE U LIKE MY MASTERPIECE.
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- Rook219 - 12/03/2008
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I think it would've helped the flow of your words with a couple commas and starting new lines... But that's probably just your style against my preference XD
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- Insane Jester646 - 12/02/2008
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nice emotions shown
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keep on writing =) - Report As Spam
- Strictly Platonic - 12/02/2008
- well i go through alot of emotions soget used to me.
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