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I spy with my little eye
Flames eating up the skies
I hear with my little ear
Hundreds upon thousands of cries
I taste with the mouth on my face
Blood as it pools where I lie
I scream as Death whispers to me
My life flashes, it's over, goodbye.
- by Girl_in_love61636 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/05/2008 |
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- Title: I spy
- Artist: Girl_in_love61636
- Description: I meant for this poem to be told through the eyes of a child. Oh, but I won't ramble on about it, you read it for yourselves and tell me HONESTLY what you think. I LOVE critisme.
- Date: 12/05/2008
- Tags: ispy
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 3ni Vakero - 12/20/2008
- damn i loved it
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- sofaKing_rich - 12/08/2008
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I really, really, REALLY like it! its so good and very deep.....Keep up da good work! XD
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- Shinedown_grlie - 12/06/2008
- thats sad, but it is very good!!!!
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- pvtfoshisl - 12/05/2008
- sounds like a holocaust poem.lol
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