Crystalized Hate

• Artist: -Cynical Sexy Bear-
• Description: Ugh, I entered this for the holiday poem contest but realized that no one can rate it....>.< Anywho~
  Enjoy, and don't question it.
• Date: 12/07/2008
• Tags: crystalized hate

You stare at me
I stare at you
Knowing this isn't through
I could tell the world
Of what you've done
All your harmful, shameful "fun"
You stare at me
I stare at you
Still debating what to do
The Perfect Christmas
Ruined by my endless hate
The very soul you penetrate
Strike my forgotten fear
Cradle me as if I'm dear
Lie to me even more
Run through the empty door
Feeling so miniscule
It's my life you ridicule
Taking what I hold so close
Not letting me appose
Apologize? It's much too late.
I still have my crystalized hate.

Comments

[KCO_rocks]

very good. I definitly know the feeling in which you are writing about. Keep on writing you did a great job on this one!

[wiccanmother_zoey]

Just as any good poet should, you do express plenty of emotion, and you do a wonderful job in using words and imagry to express it. Great job! and in truth, i understand. I can level with what you are saying 100%. Keep your chin up. the law of three always prevails in the end^_^. Wonderful work! Keep writing!

[catty_girl_09]

It's good...and even though you say not to question it, it forces one to think of the horrid times he/she(it?) has created for the narrator...

[PapaOwns]

very good u have talent!

[SmileCute12]

amazing...O.O 5/5
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