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I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
Never ever leaving that accursed world,
I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
But then, you walked down, rescue me you, I knew you would,
I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
You were scared of me at first, not trusting me,
I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
I asked you, would you at least try to I begged,
I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
You listened to me, you gave all you could to help me,
I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
But all you gave was not enough to help,
I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
You were killed trying to save me, a total stranger,
I waited in silence forever, waiting to be rescued,
So now I still wait in silence, waiting to be rescued.
- by InkheartKitty16 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Waiting in Silence
- Artist: InkheartKitty16
- Description: THIS POEM I MADE REALLY SUCKS, but i want 2 know wat u think of it so plz comment
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: waiting silence
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Kitten254 - 06/24/2009
- interesting...........in a good way
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- Kaman-chan - 01/01/2009
- good!^^
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- a_godess - 12/17/2008
- pie this is good!!! god read my story its under mtmoney for writing and its chapter one so tell me what you think it sucj=ks this dosent suck my writing sucks!!!
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- InkheartKitty16 - 12/17/2008
-
ty 4 reminding me its 1 word
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 12/11/2008
- FOREVER IS 1 WORD!
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- The Love of Money - 12/08/2008
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That's really sad... it's a nice job.
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