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Midnight pools about her form
Illuminating her with its soft glow
Reflecting its golden light
Through her curled ebony locks
Casting its mystic shadow across her still form
A breeze blows its gentle way
Through the open window
And rustles the bedclothes spread around her
Making her shiver against the chill air
Across the moon, a shadow is cast
Darkened by skeletal wings
And the midnight bird of the Shadows
Alights at the open window
He perches himself upon the sill
And cries a mournful caw
For the love he has abandoned
To her own cries of sorrow
His dark feathers shine
In the midnight sun
The black beads of his eyes
Reflect the glow of the moon
But his heart he believes
Has vanished with his soul
He’s lost himself to the darkness
Until his light returns once more
Until his light returns once more
He sits there, watching her sleep
The deep, even motion of her breast
Rising and falling with each breath
As lines appear upon her forehead
As though she was suffering in a nightmare
He watched the tears course down her cheeks
Heard her silent whispers as she called to him
"I love you," she said in her dream
"Will you never return to me?"
If only I could still shed tears, he thought
I would cry you a river of my sorrows
All for you
And all for the loss of each other
"And I, you."
Came the murmered croak of the raven
Before spreading his wings and flying away
- Title: The Raven
- Artist: WynnFir3
- Description: This is an extension of a poem I wrote last year (the extension was also written last year). It's based off of a series of roleplays with my friend Alex concerning two of our characters.
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: raven
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/18/2009
- that was lovely just inspiring. turely a masterpiece ^^
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- Kanashii Aiyoku - 12/08/2008
- Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I love the imagery in this poem. Do continue writing such wonderful poems. 5/5 and faves.
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- hi5201 - 12/08/2008
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This is a great poem!
U have a special gift, continue writing poems and spreading ur gift!
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