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Thou art my love, my life-- thou
Art to me, myself and I a indefatigable abyss thou art
To my dreams, my fantasies a tiring pestilence but thou art to
Me an enigma thou art to me
A deep dark poison thou art to me a
Delicious poison, thou art to me a delicious
Torment me forever.
- Title: Thou Art
- Artist: Ehbis
- Description: A poem based on the quote "Thou art to me a delicious torment" by Ralph Emerson.
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: ralphwaldoemerson poem thouart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- demyri - 12/16/2008
- considering you based it off someone else's poem, i think you did an excellent job in mixing that line in and making it all your own biggrin
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- Rebelette - 12/16/2008
- Bloody brilliant!
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/12/2008
- Hm, aside from the overuse of certain terms, not bad. I enjoy your vocabulary. In honesty, I feel you could do a better job if you made this poem completely your own, and did not base it off of that. 3.75/5.
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- tom_boy_mauh - 12/09/2008
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1st comment!!!!!!!
okay mweh noe really understand (well basicly) but mweh luves ur words !!!! 5/5 - Report As Spam
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