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Drops of Demon
wash and wither,
while Angelic Tears
will cast away.
Upon the bed of ocean,
'tis here where I lay.
For a hundred years,
I am cast away.
Flung away, by Angels' Tears.
Set upon a task of slumber,
One-hundred years,
I rest at sea.
Casted off by Angels Tears,
Demons come to rescue me.
So many nights,
I lay in cold.
While listening, listening
to stories of old.
A woman captured, all at sea.
Demons come, to rescue me.
Here I lie, within the fire
within the hellborne come and tire.
I lie within the tongues of flame,
I am the woman, the woman from sea.
I am the one.
The Demons rescued me.
For those whom lie
and were casted too;
I have no empathy for you.
They slumber, mindless,
task- and careless,
while I wash,
In tongues of flame.
While I wash
In waves of hell.
- by Petals on the Breeze |
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- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: One-Hundred Years
- Artist: Petals on the Breeze
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Description:
I literary, wrote this up on the spot. Opened up the computer and: Shazzam!
This is a poem that shows the confusion between angels and devils, right and wrong. I hope you rate fairly, and please, do comment! There is nothing more delightful than a poet coming home, to a rating of five whole stars! - Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: onehundred years angels devils rescue
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Comments (7 Comments)
- _Roooose_ - 02/01/2009
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It seems every poem i go to comment on, Alitare beats me to it XD.
I agree with him though...
and i like this poem alot. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- OhhShitniz - 12/11/2008
- I liked it :] Good job
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
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Eh, as mediocre as this poem is, it blows most of the putrescent piles of garbage on here away... 2.5/5...
"cool but it no rhyme" Poems do not have to rhyme, you imbecile. Ever heard of free verse, or poetic prose? Humanity makes me sick. - Report As Spam
- YuMmY_CoOkieXP - 12/10/2008
- cool but it no rhyme! cry
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- HarajukuGirl92 - 12/10/2008
- I really like it!5/5
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- GigaK - 12/09/2008
- WOW.....you have NO IDEA how much this syncronizes with my life....wow...My status is confidetial but...Wow....5/5...
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- WOOF84 - 12/09/2008
- I like it, but it could be just a tad more clear and your characters are kinda cunfuzzlementness, but maybe thats just me, dont be mad, dont worry bee happy...ok too far
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