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My raven is gone and lost
and for what it cost,
wasn't worth what I paid
so down I laid...
I lay my head down to sleep
but before I do I must weep
the feeling is so big and strong
wake me up and sound the gong
here he comes, another bird
my cries...he must have heard
my phoenix with his tears of pearls
let them fall into my locks and curls
he laid his head upon my own
in his cheery song, an empty tone
in his hand he took mine
'would you be my valentine?'
I woke up from that little dream
and found him sitting next to me
he stroked my hair once or twice
and did so soft and nice
He looked at me with his deep blue eyes
and we took to skies
flying together since that very day
and we shall be together, as it may
- by Mylie Alina Elise King |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Raven and the Phoenix
- Artist: Mylie Alina Elise King
- Description: i wrote this a long time ago...please enjoy :)
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: raven phoenix
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Xx-Zaldar-xX - 01/03/2010
- Hmm... this is good, I like it. But some of the words you used are pretty non-descriptive. For instance, the word big is very basic. Perhaps try replacing it with vast, huge, or maybe deep? Just a suggestion.
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- animewolf16 - 01/15/2009
- I really like this! Great work! biggrin
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- The Love of Money - 12/13/2008
- All I can say is smile
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- THICCalicious - 12/13/2008
- I LOVE IT!
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