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I was on my porch last night
The smoke sank into my skin
So I came inside to be with you
My dad was sick
My mom she cared for him
Her loving nursed him back to life
I ran away
I couldn't even look at him
For fear that one day he'd be gone
He grabbed my shoulders
And then he said
These last three years
I know they've been hard
But now it's time to go out of the desert and into the sun
Even if it's alone
I was on my porch last night
The smoke sank into my skin...
- by Bleh Apocrypha |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Love (From my dad)
- Artist: Bleh Apocrypha
- Description: This took me AGES to come up with!
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: love from
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kiki Kitsune33 - 06/19/2019
- I love how real this is, 5/5 I hope you win <3
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- little_silver_wolf - 02/22/2009
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thats very cool
you are a really good writer ^.^ - Report As Spam
- Chahklat - 02/16/2009
- This is actually good, but still needs some work.
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- elinares - 12/20/2008
- you are a really writer ,keep writing ,so i can read
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- Arjoko - 12/14/2008
- i agree with those before me this is kinda confusing
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- CazzyxBear - 12/14/2008
- Its alright, but you should edit it. its just confusing to read : ) better luck next time, 2/5
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- Joe Elf - 12/14/2008
- Kind of confusing. Who did you come inside to be with? and what do you mean by go out of the desert and into the sun? I need some clarity on this. Pm me? If you will.
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