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Like twisted leaves on a broken tree,
As fall to winter these words to me.
Say farewell to the sun as it dies in the west,
Taking with it my htoughts of a day,
But with no regrets it would seem best,
If the days would just die away.
~DR
sweatdrop now wasn't that fun?
- by Devilish Reminder |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/16/2008 |
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- Title: Untitled Poem
- Artist: Devilish Reminder
- Description: Just this thing I wrote one time...nothing much, really. Just thought I'd put it up here on gaia and see how it holds out. If you have any idea of what might've wokred better, please comment and tell me what. I might revise it and give you credit!! Well please vote fairly!! XD
- Date: 12/16/2008
- Tags: untitled poem
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Devilish Reminder - 12/17/2008
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heh to Gooy: thank you much old friend!! -huggles-
and now for Tibarm: yeah I noticed...theres a footnote at the bottom of teh comments ^_^ - Report As Spam
- Demon Lord Tibarm - 12/17/2008
- U misspelled thought but for the rest good work 4/5.
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- gooycheese - 12/16/2008
- Another 5/5 for the talented DR , I havent read anything I didnt like of yours smile
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- Devilish Reminder - 12/16/2008
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Oh hah hah ish okay!! I loves Robert Frost!! Thanks for the comment!! XD
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- Unfound Dreams - 12/16/2008
- When your writing poems, it really doesn't matter about spelling if people know what the word is supposed to be. Like sometimes I will put the as thge, and I fix it but sometimes I don't see it, becasue I am so focused on getting my poem seen by the whole Gaian world. And your writing sort of reminds me of Robert Frost. Oh I am soooooo sorry, this is getting too long!
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- Devilish Reminder - 12/16/2008
- o.e i should REALLY learn to spell check.... "htoughts" in line 4 should really be "thoughts." Sorry.
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