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love is a fist thats beating you until you fall
it will beat you until your down and can't get back up again
it comes and goes like a stranger
it can be a friend or a foe
its tries to overcome you until you cant fight back
love is just one step to depression
- by lost in tears forever |
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- | Submitted on 12/21/2008 |
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- Title: love's becomeing
- Artist: lost in tears forever
- Description: this is a poem i wrote when i thought love was made to hurt i hope you like it you dont have to so you can comment and rate
- Date: 12/21/2008
- Tags: lovesbecomeing
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Comments (7 Comments)
- DietMusketer - 08/27/2009
- ahhhhhhhh cute i luv it
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- Esa Smoky - 08/27/2009
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i agree with sasori
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- Sasori rocks puppetry - 07/02/2009
- This poem has some truth about love. I really like the personification.
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- XxJesse RooxX - 12/21/2008
- omg i liked it >.<
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- xCULLENxLUVRx - 12/21/2008
- i like it CX
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- lilchels_14 - 12/21/2008
- i like it smile
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- iiRockYourWorldX - 12/21/2008
- O.O That is Amazing...
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