pain

• Artist: Xxdark shadow127xX
• Description: ok just to tell you all of u who hate emotional poems gtf outta mah poems then and dont leav them bull crap comments lyk : imso sick of so many gaians being so emo. its bull crap and i dont wanna hear it
• Date: 12/24/2008
• Tags: pain

do you love the pain?
with all those blood staines?
u couldnt even walk
i made sure you wouldnt even talk
ill take your pain
and take that cain
and walk out the door without knowing doc
man you dont know im going through
i broke the screw up plan
then i saw your brother stan
he loved your pain
i didnt
i said :stan get outta this healing plant
but he said i cant
i said why not
because he said
the doctors are psycho killers
so soon after ill give them the wrong fillers
do you love the pain?i ask the doc
you love the blood stain?
well to bad you aint gettin that cain

Comments

[Xxdark shadow127xX]

eh i was just bored on this one i guess plus my friend paid me 50$ bucks if i wrote it

[Agrikar the Hidden]

... I dunno, I'm trying to figure out what your trying to say, at least on a deeper level besides what the actual words. I mean, it has the basis of a fair poem, but... a lot of the time you seem to just be rhyming stuff without trying to add to the building meaning.

[Missmarypop]

I liked ur poem but u know try not to be so harsh to public... ^^