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I can’t believe this!
He said he loves me!
But he doesn’t!
He doesn’t care for me!
He doesn’t love me!
He doesn’t care if I get hurt!
What did I do wrong?
With out him I would be dead right now!
He is was reason I don’t kill myself!
And he knows!
But now maybe I should.
He’s not in my life anymore!
He cheated on me!
He left me for someone who cheated on him!
I don’t need him in my life!
I don’t need anyone in my life!
He said he’d love me but now he doesn’t.
- by xXxFallenMaidenxXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/24/2008 |
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- Title: He doesn't
- Artist: xXxFallenMaidenxXx
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- Date: 12/24/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Nikki4815 - 12/26/2008
- in poetry, explaination points seem to make the words go faster if spoken aloud. One or two is okay, but not after every line. I know that not all poems have to rhyme, but they at least need to flow. This is just like a rant to your friend, not a poem.
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- your nemises - 12/25/2008
- it needs to be more like poetry add more flow to it to make it better good idea but everyone is the same be more different
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