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You, all you-
Ever did,
Is pretend-
Pretend,
To be my friend,
I see the light-
Of your blight,
Let it just end...
(Copyright 2006.)
- by Guard13007 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/26/2008 |
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- Title: False Friend
- Artist: Guard13007
- Description: Another one, I don't think it's very good...
- Date: 12/26/2008
- Tags: false friend
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- Guard13007 - 07/20/2009
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I have it "Let it just end..." for a reason. "Just let it end..." is a common phrase, and "Let it just end..." has a slightly different meaning to me.
Everyone but two or three of my friends is just a pretender... - Report As Spam
- Old Time Rock Lover - 01/18/2009
- I've had many people pretend to be my friend, its sad
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- guitarbri - 12/30/2008
- i think its good but it'd be better if instead for the last line you wrote "Just let it end..." That would make it greater xD
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- X --- Imperfectiion - 12/27/2008
- OMG!!! THATS HOW I FEEEL ABOUT ONE FRIEND OF MINE.....GAH! I CAN KILL HIM!
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