xXsorrows_kingsXx true 1

• Artist: graceful_hinata
• Description: hehe not my 1 :P
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: xxsorrowskingsxx true

my heart has done cracked, hurt, broken, and shaters i just hav two places

left of my heart one is for friends the others for the people i love so try to keep

sum people close before thay come back to brake ur heart even more cuz

thats what happened to me iv been hurt so much that i hav been pushing

people away and now im about dead on the inside cuz i let some hav my heart

and thay hurt it and abused it.

*a broken heart is like a broken mirror its better left broken cuz it hurts to try and fix it*







and my heart broke more and i thought of a way out





cuz i thought my death would set me free

then when i found people that love me and cared for me i stoped trying


you and i are friends...
you fight i fight...
you cry i cry...
you hurt i hurt....
you jump of a bridge well i geuss ill see you soon...
cuz we are and always will be friends..

Comments

[Silver Goat]

not bad but its"the heart is like a broken mirror, dont try to fix it you will only hurt yourself

[RisexWithxthexDead]

Good, but I say 4/5 because of grammar and spelling mistakes. Not being rude, but it seems like you work much harder when the poem is grammatically correct.

[zinnia4]

speachless