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if a-->b and b-->c, then a-->c
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It's coldcold- cold because it's wet. Like, the pavement,
when it's black- it's wetwet- wet because it rained.
The tile is green
Everything is an odd- not- even-
no one seems to want to smile- we all just frown
at each other- smother the little bright pinpricks
of lightlight- like the little happy things
that could be.
This makes me unhappy.
It's an ugly green, too.
The grain of wood- if you look close enough-
it's little round circles [not real] it's- fake.
They use fake paper to make fake wood.
It's a table, I mean. It's a classroom table,
a computer table. With computers.
They're fake too.
Made out of plastic and metal [and little gold
wires, on the inside] whose to say that they are real?
No one ever told me that, anyways.
It's an ugly tile.
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- by E d i b l e F l o w e r |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: if a=b and b=c then a=c
- Artist: E d i b l e F l o w e r
- Description: I was on the verge of a breakdown when I wrote this (in math class! x( yuck!) But now I really like it. (And, personally, I disagree. A maybe equal b, and b may equal c, but somehow I think the term -equal- just isnt what people think it is. Cause a and c could be two totally different things, right? I mean, cant two things equal each other, but still be totally different?)
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: then
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Comments (2 Comments)
- sayaandtenshi - 05/21/2009
- This is a very well written poem. I like the expression behind it and the wording. Not only that but the imagery was just amazing. 5/5
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- AfterShockk - 04/19/2009
- Oh my god. I looooove this. Not so much in that I can relate, but more like you can see that it was the little things that caught your eye when you were super upset. But it's more than that, I... I don't know lol 5/5 ^^
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