Do You Know

• Artist: MUSIC_IS_FOR3V3R
• Description: i wrote dis while thinking about da guy dat i LUV
  can u pple help me name it?
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: love

My life was dark like a rainy day,
like by the sanfrisco bay.
It was cold
& i had nothing to hold...on to.
I had no sunshine before you came along
& for the first time i want to sing a song.
I have to hear your voice
it's like i have no choice
because if i dont its like i start to go crazy.
The day is hazy
until you call me.
If your near you could see
how much you affect me!

Comments

[damncrazy4werewolfs]

wow, its good

[clumsy-story of my life]

if you tried not to rhyme it, it would have been really good. i mean i like it, but the rhyming didn't help me like it even more. try reading some of mine some time, if you have a chance.

[[~Femme Fatale~]]

The rhymes are forced. I dont really like it sorry. sad

[eyesofanangel667]

You could name it idunno...Can't See Without Your Eyes, I guess. Kinda dorky, oh well.

[selene_queen_of_a_lost]

wow u seem to really care for this guy....ummm.....how about, do you know, for a title idk just a suggestion ??

[BuBbLyGiRl_xOxO]

Nice.. I really like it...