What If I Die

• Artist: wwjdforme_cheese
• Description: It is a poem about the way I think at times....when I wonder if I'm going to ever get well again.
• Date: 01/01/2009
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What If I Die
My mind has been wondering
And constantly pondering
What would happen if I die?
When physical pain is running high
And you are slowly losing your mind
Your doctors about to give you results
And it’s looking as grim as your thoughts
Could I die soon?
Even before the stroke of noon?
I try to think positive
But I can’t
I think about what I can do
And what I am supposed to
And maybe I won’t yet
I haven’t paid my debt
To this world
So I’ll keep stepping
And see what’s going to happen

Comments

[wwjdforme_cheese]

thank u very much. smile

[Quzo]

Hmmmm...I hope you get well soon. Your piece of writing really does get the point across and is rather descriptive. 4 Stars. Oh and your trying to ryhme type 'rhyming zone' on google it's a site that I use for those tough to rhyme words.