Free As A Bird.

• Artist: whitejade13
• Description: It's not very good. But this is what i think. It might be confusing to you. Sorry bout that.
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: free bird

People say that they want
to be as free as a bird.
But why?
Birds aren't free, not really.

They're on this earth
just like us people.
They're trapped, unable
to be free of this cruel place.

What do birds have to
live for anyway?
Nothing.
Nothing at all.

Birds are like people really.
Living, moving around aimlessly
until the day that they
die.

What's the use of people?
All we do is live.
We really don't do anything special.
We're useless.

So I don't waste my time
wishing i was a bird.
I live as a useless human
Trying to be important.

Even though it's pointless.

Comments

[Mockingbird 79]

Deep, but why r u calling people useless? isnt living wat makes us special?

[Bleuraven123]

I hope you don't mean this.... We're really not useless...
But I agree that writing depressing poems are easier... heh

[Farrelei]

Wow, your writing style is strangely similar to mine, and oddly enough I can understand exactly what you are saying here.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Another depressing poem... You are turning into me. razz Don't let that happen.

[Scarlet Wrath]

I LOVE THE FIRST 3 STANSAS!!(SP) *faves*
I can NOT tell you how right you are. This is simply BEAUTIFUL!!!!
The fact that people use birds to symbolize freedom means nothing if you're bound to a war polluted planet. It's become cliche and it will lose it's true meaning in time. But i all seriousness....WHOA!!!

[Nochs]

a good view point on humanity (if only alittle depressing) but a worth while read 5/5