End of the tunnel

• Artist: X-B r o k e n R a i n b w
• Description: I know this poem sounds really emo and I understand that some people don't like that but still tell me what you think.
  Again I wrote this in my school library when i had nothing else to do.
  One day I just decided to try poetry...
  Its no masterpiece but I decided to put it out here for people to see my first ever poem.
  
  Comment and tell me any tips that you think i should add please. And also vote.
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: tunnel kill fall fair cage

Let it kill us all.
Why fight.?
If the only thing at the end of a tunnel is a deadly fall.
The fall will kill as all.

A life full of disapointment and despair.
Like an empty fair.

Locked in a golden cage.
No key.
Will I ever be free.

I watch people try.
I watch people cry.

Why try?
If the only thing at the end of a tunnel is a deadly fall
The fall will kill us all...

Comments

[Oakyia]

library places make you think stuff like, evil places, only fornerd and geeks and people that are doing a last min. project.
very good 6/5

[Jana Kennedy]

hey rita!!!
i think it is creative. how did u think of this in the library????not very inspirational.