A Forgotten Pain

• Artist: tear goddess
• Description: Well, this came to me due to a random memory of someone I was attatched to, I couldn't live without him. (we were NOT lovers)Then for some reason, things changed. I won't go into deep detail but he pritty much became a basterd, forgot I exsited. I was over it for most of the time apart, but just the other night a memory of us mucking around came back. And so yea... I've been, needing to express it.
  
  Please comment/criticise, rate, tell me what I'm doing wrong/right. Thanks.
• Date: 01/07/2009
• Tags: forgotten pain

Last night you crossed my mind again, I don't know why
It's so hard not to, I began to cry
The tears started falling once more
I though I'd be happy, I though I was sure
But a single memeorie brings so much pain
Another thought, another blood stain
I was over you, I didn't care
About the things that you said or the way you would stare
Now look at me, a total mess
Haven't you already caused me a lifetime of stress
Leave me be, get out of my head
I want to live, without the stains of red
You have it all, every thing you wanted
Why are you back, I'm already haunted.

Comments

[tear goddess]

Thank youuuu^^

[iwillbeatharvestmoon64]

its really good and i know how u feel bacically the same thing happened to me...

[Anika Hansen]

I liked it also. Good job!!

[Fake Silence]

I like the poem. But, I just can't understand why your spellings are so different from how i spell. Is it because of the places we come from are different? I learn British English at my place. You?