Why Just A Friend?

• Artist: xXblack-lighteningXx
• Description: a short poem describing the turmoils in side u when u love a friend...but ur just invisible to them...
  constructive comments unly pls....
• Date: 01/11/2009
• Tags: just friend

Im so Tired Of Jus Bein the friend!
im so tired of jus bein who u come to
in the End!
I want something more,
I need to explore..
2 c if its right..u and me...
i don jus wanna be the one who consoles u...
i don jus wanna be the good guy friend...i want to be urs and 4 u to be mine.and girl...all i can say is that ur on my mind..

U constantly come seeking refuge in my words, and i, jus a fool give u all
without concern. I love u i need u!,
then y must U be stern,
in ur view of me as a friend!? i've been there 4 u, u've been there 4 me,and girl, u know that always, ur friend iwillll be! but...

i don jus wanna be the one who consoles u...
i don jus wanna be the good guy friend...i want to be urs and 4 u to be mine.and girl...all i can say is that ur on my mind..

Comments

[krissy45]

omg thats awsome and the spelling dosnt matter anyway it is the thought that counts...trust me iv been through that ill give u a 5/5

[sweet treat 1316]

its so sweet.thats how i feel rite now with my SO new fiance.he proposed to me just a litle wile ago... but im aching 2 c him!

[Auquanatura Ame]

It's good, but when you don't spell right the peom/song just seem's misleaded and bad. If someone read it to me out loud it would sound so much better than seeing the spelling mistakes.

[blue_cloud_angel]

ahh nice poem but ugly spelling but dats ok n btw dd u noe im so good in spelling? btw tnx 4 commenting on my poem if u wnt 2 c it again write dis
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101066447

[xXblack-lighteningXx]

Thnx Purple Pwr lol i was rlly lazy that day when i wrote it but i still felt like I had to write it down somewhere...thnx again for the comment!

[PurplePwr012]

Ok, overlooking the spelling issues, this poem is amazing. I could feel every emotion so strongly. . .that's a nice piece of writing. 5/5

[xXblack-lighteningXx]

thnx