Miss You.

• Artist: Ashplease
• Description: I dunno I kinda got this Feeling For A Certain Person (No Names!) And I wanna Write about it So please Enjoy!
• Date: 01/14/2009
• Tags: miss

Everywhere I Go, You are There.
Even If We Are No Where Near Each Other.
And I always think I dont Care....
But I do.
But I Never Admit it To You.

Because I'm Scared.
Of What you'll Think.
So Dont Let Me Sink.

Because If you Look Past What I did, You'll See that I was Hurt.
And that I didnt want to be treated like Some Pot Of Dirt.
Lifeless.

So When I do See You, and Smile, Dont wait Make me Wait For A While, Don't.
Because If you Do......
Then I'll Miss you.

Comments

[amantewords]

Yeah the rhyming was mint, very much so. But i'd have to say it was too clear and clean cut for my taste. I think alot of people can relate to this but how you made the overall mood was too restricting for the art. It was nice.

[music_rules14]

u did a great job
10/10 is wat i give u

[290DarkStars]

i love it! the stanzes are filled with rhyme and the storry impresses upon me. 5/5. you really can move someone with words!